martes, 6 de diciembre de 2016
THE DIVORCE
Divorce nowadays is something very normal for couples. Consists on the separation of two people that were married. The main causes of the divorce are that the love has finished and the persons of the couple are fighting all the day. I think that when the couple get into a divorce, they have to be very sure about it. If they have kids is too bad for them because is a difficult situation for them.
On the other part I think that if the couple aren't okey and they are aren't comfortable, is good to get into a divorce to be good and happy with themselves.
in conclusion if there is any other option is better to divorce than to stay in the relationship.
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Revise the structure, you don't use paragraphs, it is all together in just one paragraph. Be VERY careful with subjects. You never use subjects and there are compulsory to begin a sentence.
ResponderEliminarBe careful with:
"consists on" = "it consists in" (l.1)
"causes of the divorce" = "causes of divorce" (l.2)
"the love" = "love" (l.2)
"the persons" = "the people" (l.3)
"the couple get" = "the couple gets" (l.3)
"is too bad" = "it is too bad" (l.4)
"because is" = "because it is" (l.4)
"on the other part" = "on the other hand" (l.5)
"the couple aren't" = "the couple isn't" (l.5)
"they are aren't" = "they aren't" (l.6)
"is good" = "it is good" (l.7)
"is better" = "it is better" (l.7)
"to divorce" = "to get divorced" (l.7)
Grade: 5